九年级英语第三次月考作文展评(2)
几年的英语学习经历，你一定积累了许多学习英语的方法，趁此机会，给大家介绍一下你的学习方法吧。请以How to Improve my English为题写一篇80个单词左右的短文。
本次月考的英语作文定格在了第三单元上，关于英语学习方法的讨论。此话题，学生都有话可说，而且课本上有专门关于英语学习方法的大讨论。
从学生的作文中，我收获了力量。真的没有想到，学生的作文中介绍的学习方法几乎没有相同的，而且都有自己的语言表达了自己的观点，没有一点“抄袭”的痕迹。因为当作文题目出来之后，还真是有点担心，因为书本上那些关于英语学习方法的句子，曾经让学生背诵过，学生会不会一样的作文呢？回答是否定的！
答应学生，只要作文写得漂亮，老师就会给同学们发到网上。这样的事情，对我们农村的孩子来说，真的是一件很向往的事情，就想我们小的时候想让自己的作文变成铅字，印刷在书上一样，那是一份期待，一份渴望，一份对英语的爱恋！
How to Improve my English
白雪雪
Nowadays, English is widely used by many people all over the world. But it’s difficult for us to learn English well. So, I have some ways on how to learn English well.
First, we should learn new new words. It’s useful for us to learn English. I copy some words and then read aloud them, and stick them on my bedroom wall. And stick to remembering them every day. Second, when I speak to others in English, I don’t be shy. I am not afraid of making mistakes. I do believe myself! Last, we should take an active part in an English club and improve English.
I believe we will learn English well in this way. Speaker louder than words! Come on!
白雪的英语作文，每次都很用心。开头总起很好，从英语的广泛性写起，然后说自己有学好英语的方法。最后一段，I believe we will learn English well in this way. 给读者力量，用上述我介绍的方法去做，一定会把英语学好！
白雪的突出之处就在于能够学以致用，大量的使用了英语短语和句型：it’s +adj.+ for sb.+ to do sth, stick to doing, be afraid of doing sth, take an active part in 等等，还有一句谚语作总结很是精彩：Speaker louder than words!
How to Improve my English
李瑞琪
English is widely used in our daily life. So we everyone must learn English well. Here are some ways to learn English.
One of the secrets of becoming a good language learner is to do lots of listening practice. Listening is first. Practice makes perfect. So we should listen as often as possible. Second, don’t be shy. Believing in yourself is the first step on the road to success. Third, if you have difficulty remembering new words, you can copy new words on pieces of paper. And read them aloud when you see them.
Easier said than done. Come on together!
瑞琪的作文最大气，大气在“用英语思维做作文”，这是最值得表扬的。比如第一段：Here are some ways to learn English. 这个句子使用here的倒装句，是真正的地道英语表述，一开头就会抓住阅卷老师的心，分数就会上去。
as often as possible，have difficulty doing sth, Believing in yourself 动名词做主语等等，都是用的非常熟练，老道。另外，大量的复合句，比如时间状语从句，条件状语从句，都为整篇文章增色添彩。最后用英语谚语作总结，更是锦上添花，完美收场！
How to Improve my English
姜凤霞
I’m very glad to share my methods about learning English. As we know, English is widely spoken in many countries. So it’s necessary for to learn English. Here are some advice on how to improve English.
First, Listening is based on learning English well. Please listen to English songs and watch English movies. Second, do more reading, try to guess the meanings of new words and get main idea of the article. Don’t translate every word into Chinese meanings. Third, I take lots of grammar notes in class. Last but not least, believing in yourself because it is the first step on the road to success.
Try your best to learn English well.
How to Improve my English
姜凤敏
I’m glad to share my opinions with you here. As we know, English is important for us to communicate with others nowadays. So as a middle student, what can we do to improve English? Well, let me tell you:
First, we had better preview the day’s lesson before class, take notes in class, and review the lesson after class. Second, we should copy the new words on pieces of paper and stick them on the wall, and read aloud them. And change them often. Third, we can keep an English diary in English every day.
As long as you stick to doing them, I ‘m sure you will succeed. Please believe: There is a will, there is way.
这一对双胞胎姐妹，可是我最喜欢的学生当中的一对，他们性格开朗，阳光，每天的微笑都会挂在脸上，让人喜欢得不得了。
双胞胎也许真的会有心灵感应，她们的开头竟然惊人的形似。I’m very glad to share my methods about learning English.（姜凤霞） I’m glad to share my opinions with you here.（姜凤敏）其实，这篇文章以这样的方式开头，还真的很棒。
凤霞的这一句话就是标准的地道英语：Here are some advice on how to improve English. 凤霞对阅读的介绍最实用，建议不要把每一个单词都要翻译成汉语，不认识的单词试着猜，然后获得文章的大概意思。凤霞文章中使用了大家没有用到了好短语：be based on, translate …into…, Last but not least, Try one’s best to do sth.
凤敏的出色不仅在开头，结尾更是：There is a will, there is way. 有志者事竟成，给读者信心，只要坚持，就会成功。英语方法中第一条最可取，也是作为一名学生最基本的学习方法：preview the day’s lesson before class, take notes in class, and review the lesson after class.课前复习，课上记笔记，课下复习。
精彩还有，精彩还在继续！
每次送毕业班，总在担心学生的作文，毕竟15分，可不小的分量。现在看到学生的作文，由衷的高兴，似乎那些担心变得越来越小。也由此总结出，英语作文必须要练习。
学生认真系统的复习和背诵基础的知识欧美的英语句子、句型。中国有句古话说得好“熟读唐诗三百首，不会吟诗也会作”。同样，要想让学生迅速提高英语作文水平，具有较强的英语写作能力，首先必须要熟读和背诵一些句型和短文。我们的学生由于缺乏作文的训练，好多学生写出来的句子根本不符合英语的语言习惯，还有好多学生写作文时，对照汉语，逐字翻译，根本不去理会中英文化的差异。
大量的背诵和阅读是提高写作能力的最有效方法，如果学生的脑海里积累了大量的优美的英语句式和短文，写起作文来，就会脱口而出，顺手拈来，发挥到极致。
希望总在前方！
