A Visit To The Zoo
Today is Sunday. The sun is shining , and the sky is blue .I go to WangCheng park with my parents ,and visit the zoo.
There are so many animals in the zoo ,tigers , liones,Wolves ,deers ,bears,birds and so on .I like them very much .In the northwest corner of the park, there are two elephants . They have big noses ,long teeth, big ears , and their bodies look like big walls .They are eating carrots ,and very kind to us . Near the elephants,there is a monkey-hill. Many monkeys are living in the hill. Some are eating, some are playing games ,some are climbing hill, some are having a rest . Look ,there are three monkeys ,two large and one small, they are sitting one by one ,and combing hairs for each other. What a happy family!
Time goes by fast .It is time to have lunch . We have to leave . I will never forget this interesting day.
参观动物园
今天是星期天，阳光明媚，天空湛蓝，我和爸爸妈妈一块儿去王城公园，参观动物园。
动物园里有许多动物，有老虎、狮子、狼、鹿、熊和鸟类等等。我很喜欢这些动物。在公园的西北角有两只大象，他们有长鼻子、长牙齿、大耳朵，像墙一样的身体，它们正在吃红萝卜，他们对我们很友善。距离大象不远处，有一座猴山，那里住着很多猴子。有的在吃东西，有的在玩游戏，有的在爬山，有的在休息。快看！那里有三只猴子，两大、一小，他们一个挨一个坐着，在互相梳理着毛发，真是一个幸福的家庭！
时间过得真快！午饭的时间到了，我们不得不离开了。这真是有意义的一天，我将永久难忘。
（这是前段时间的一个周末和爸爸妈妈参观王城公园动物园后写下的，因为还没有学习过去时，我用一般现在时写作文。中间有很多动物用的是复数名词形式。我重点描写了可爱的大象和猴子，因为我觉得他们更可爱。欢迎大家指导点评。）
