2014年考研精选优秀信件模板--建议信(2)

2013-06-05

　　闪光词汇及词组：

　　take the opportunity to: 利用这个机会

　　beneficial: adj.有益的

　　keyboard: n. 键盘

　　purchase: v. 购买

　　subscribe to: 定购

　　be furnished with: 安装有

　　lighting system: 照明系统

　　万能句型：

　　I would like to take the opportunity to express my appreciation for your kind assistance as always.

　　I feel that it would be beneficial to express my views concerning…

　　In the first place…I would also recommend…Last but not least…

　　I hope that you take my suggestions into serious consideration.

　　(2)Directions:

　　Write a letter to the president of your college about the unpleasant conditions of the university dormitory, and suggesting possible solutions

　　You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.

　　Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming” instead.

　　Do not write the address.

　　范文：

　　Dear Sir,

　　As I am a freshman, I feel that it is my obligation to make some suggestions concerning the basic conditions of our dormitory.

　　Generally speaking, the dormitory building situates in a satisfying environment and is well-equipped. However, there are two unpleasant aspects that cause inconvenience to us: 1) the heating system is in need of improvement—it fails to maintain warmth in our rooms during the winter; 2) the furniture is not designed in a practical manner –there lacks a shelf to place books.

　　I would be more than happy if my proposal could be considered and positive changes take place in these regards.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Ming

　　译文：

　　尊敬的校长：

　　作为本校的一名大一新生，我觉得就学生宿舍条件提出一些建议是我应有的责任。

　　总的来说，我们的宿舍楼环境良好、设备齐全。但是，仍然存在一些不尽人意的方面，给我们的生活带来了不便：1、冬天室内暖气不足，供暖系统需要进一步改进;2、家具设计不合理，没有供我们放书的书架。

　　如果您能够考虑我的这些建议并使学校在以上方面做出改进，我将感激不尽。

　　您真诚的，

　　李明

　　闪光词汇及词组：

　　obligation: n. 义务，责任