2012大学英语四级写作技巧——平行结构(三)(2)

英语四级写作技巧:平行结构(3)

  (作宾语的名词平行结构) 

  No: They bought the house for location and affordability.

  Yes: They bought the house because of its location and its affordability.

  (并列名词;注意代词的所有格)

  No: Why did you make Xiao Zhang feel useless and as if he was unimportant?

  Yes: Why did you make Xiao Zhang feel useless and unimportant?

  (形容词的平行结构)

  No: This could be a problem for both the winners and for those who lose.

  Yes: This could be a problem for both the winners and losers.