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托福写作指导:三类文章模板总结及写作结构(2)

2009-06-10 
本文为您介绍托福写作三类文章模板总结及写作结构。

  以后几段少写一些

  最后一个例证段的开头:the last but not the least………..

  在段落中的自问自答可以有效地证明自己的观点。

  Why……?.The answer to this problem involves many factors. The first reason can be obviously seen

  Most people would agree that….. Some people may neglect that….. in fact……other suggest that……

  Part of explanation is ………

  过渡段(A类可以没有或很少如果你在每个段子中都又对比,B类(见下)=让步段)

  如果段与段都是同一个观点:to understand the truth of…., it is also important to see…..

  what is more, a study of …..will make this point clearer

  如果我们转到另一方说对立面地优点:certainly/of course, xxx has its own advantages, such as……..+however,+ 我的观点

  I do not deny that xxx has its own merits such as … but…

  Admittedly…xxx also play an important role in ……..

  接B方案 其他结构及应急措施

  如果不够用(开头用了过多时间例如超过7分钟了)

  我们不用避讳first/for one thing, second/also, third/what is more

  我们先列出三个优点,在最后写出对立方的不足

  例如:of course, xxx give us/ bring us………….说一些对立方的优点(所以后面B方案结尾就不用让步了)。在结尾最终敲定你的观点也不迟。例如But , as xxx, we should / do not /we had better.总之,我们的body末端就像是在画一道九曲十八弯的江水(说得有点夸张),但最终她是要流向大海的。

  3结尾(A方案=让步+结论 B方案=结论)

  接A方案的结尾,让步同样可以这样:of course, xxx give us…/ xxx, certainly, has its own merits/advantages. 后面 + 一大堆“一句话例子”。最后however, for xxx, xxx, equipped with more merits like ……can be more reasonably treated as a wiser choice./I therefore reinforce my standpoint to choose xxx as my final choice (for the ……to ….)

  接B方案的结尾中只有结论(因为前面body部分已经让步):一定是转折开头but ,as xxx, we had better……记住不一定用什么to sum up/in conclusion……有时候一个转折词更能体现鲜明的逻辑关系,用别的反而模糊了。这样我们的B类的最后两段就分别完成了让步和结论的功能。

  当然,如果你没有时间了,我这里同样有紧急方案,而且效果同样很好。

  这样地结尾只有两个部分:in conclusion/ to sum up/in summery/from what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that…/it is wiser… xxx has more/better(比较级), I hence/therefore reinforce my standpoint to choose xxx as the final choice for…我测了一下时间,应该可以在一分钟之内搞定结尾。(旁白:不就是背么?!)

  二,比较类 (两种事物或一个事物的两种情况比较advantage and disadvantage)

  开头同上,不过可以不写观点:(我们加一种经典开头写观点的)since the announcement of xxx to do xxx(university’s plan to develop a new center), many people have showed their concern for the project and expressed their views of xxx. ………… it is clear that the diversified views have converged to two: …… Now that we have to make a decision, I think we should choose the latter without hesitation. / But I prefer……..

  中间:as everybody knows, ……………in short,……………..

  there are several reasons.

  first of all

  the second

  the third

  the reasons above may can answer why I prefer to ……..

  结尾because of the above reasons, I strongly recommend that we ……

  不写观点的开头( 很普便,提倡!!!):some people like ……while others……often It depends on the……Those who……will choose/like …… They like ……will prefer…….

  然后分类陈述优点

  倒数第二段就要开始驳论,说出你选择的具有更多的优点:some people would say that ……然后根据这个驳论他。就是自己立个靶子打。

  结尾和其他的不一样了,要注意始终两边说,并可以有也可以没有自己的偏向。Both ……and …….. are………and both are……….. I prefer………because………but people will make the choice that fit their lifestyle best.

  大家都知道,比较类和对立类区别不大,所以看看对立类的基本上两种就都能掌握。不过要注意的是,这两种类型的文章

  如果没提点对立面或其他选择(包括让步),是不可能上4分的。 (from redrock)

  三,自定义类(自己的观点imagine…… , why do you think……how can……)

  个人认为自定义类是更自由一些,所以前面的模板自然可以沿用,不过,自由就需要我们准备更多的例子和更利于写作的选择。比如问题问你最希望见的历史人物,最愿意回到过去哪个地方哪个时候,问你家里的哪个空间在你看来最重要……最好把所有的题目都想一遍,如果时间紧,也要把自定义类的好好想想,有备无患。

  以上模板来自一些可靠范文,经本人整理后得到。最后希望大家从这张帖子中各取所需,本人才疏学浅,难免有不妥之处,希望大家及时提出或发短信给我,我会及时改正。

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