专项高分突破：名师帮你修改考研英语作文二(1)

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题目一：You have just come back from Canada and found a music CD in your luggage that you forgot to return to Bob, your landlord there. Write him a letter to
1) make an apology, and
2) suggest a solution. 第一篇(jmwang1982Directions:

You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use "Li Ming" instead. Do not write the address. (10 points)

)Dear Bob,
　　I’m writing the letter to tell (you) that I brought your music CD with me which I borrowed from you last Sunday. I feel sorry about it.
　　（But）Please don’t worry. I have got a solution to the problem. I want to post it to you by air express, because I think it is the fastest and safest (way). Do you have any other perfect(better) suggestions? Please tell me as soon as possible.
　　I’m looking forward to your reply and wish you all the best.
Your sincerely,
Li Ming

Sara点评：文章结构比较完整，基本覆盖了题目中要求的得分点，但要注意连接词在文中的应用！