新标准对写作的要求,增加了情感因素,在准确流畅表达写作要点的同时,适当增加句子的感情色彩,增加一些人情味 ,更能够震撼读者的心灵,使文章读起来更亲切。因此,要想在高考英语书面表达中获得高分,除了要点全、语法正、表达准、结构整、逻辑顺、卷面洁外,还应尽可能使用一定的情感语言,来增强文章的情感性,打动阅卷老师,提高文章的档次。更重要的是,情感语言的使用还能增强文章的连贯性和醒目性,从而最终增强语言的可读性,提高文章的得分。请看下面一篇范文:
Dear Bob
It was great to hear from you and I am very glad you will be coming here to study Chinese. I have done some research for you and found a nice apartment, only one bus stop away from your school. It is not that big, only 25 square meters, but I think it is fine for your needs. It consists of a small bathroom and a kitchen, and a bedroom. The rent is 500 yuan per month, is this suitable to your budget? If it is too expensive, please let me know as soon as possible, so I can make further arrangements for you. Once again I am very excited that you will be coming here to study! I am looking forward to meeting you.
Kind Regards
Li Hua
评价:
文章用了较新较巧的结构“:it is fine for your needs”,“only one bus stop away”,令人耳目一新,更重要的是,较多地使用了一些情感丰富的词和结构,像开头的“great”,“very glad”,“excited”以及“I have done some research for you, and found a nice apartment”,“Is this suitable to your budget?”“If it is too expensive, please let me know as soon as possible, so I can make further arrangements for you.”等体贴充满真挚情感的语言,把“look forward to meeting you”的心情表现的淋漓尽致,具有强烈的感染力。
5、格式语域要得体恰当
英语新课程标准中的写作评价标准强调了对格式和语域的要求。这是新的写作评价标准的一大特色。我们知道,不同的文体有不同的写作格式。写记叙文要抓住记叙文的六要素;写说明文时可按照时间空间顺序进行说明,把同类或不同类的事物加以比较或使用数据进行说明,对要说明的事物作出简要的结论;写议论文时要抓住论点、论据和论证三个要素,先提出论点,然后进行用论据证明论点,最后得出结论。书信、通知、日记、欢迎词等应用文都有其自身个性化的格式和模式化的语言,写作时要根据文章体裁来确定文章的格式,然后根据不同的体裁格式和具体情景类型选择相应的话语范围、话语方式和话语基调。
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