My holidays——母子擂台赛之二十六作文

My holidays

   In the summer, there is an Expo in Shanghai. My mother，my father and I were going to Shanghai. But my mother always worries too much. Who’s going to look after the tortoise? Who’s going to look after the fish? Who’s going to look after the house? We have this problem every year. In the end, she did (may )not go anywhere, she stays at home and look after everything.（“may be ”是对现在事情不确定的推测，这是我们正在学习的重点呢）

  Before departure, I buy (bought )a blue bag. It’s got a zip. There is a label on it with my name and address on it. I like it very much.（买了个书包，是在过去时间内发生的事情，应该用一般过去时）

  I go to (have been to) Shanghai. There were hundreds of people there. My friends Ma Zong-yao and Liu Yu-kun were there , too. It is summer, the weather was very hot. Just like volcanic! The weather was too bad (awful)!（这是课文中学过的句子，为何要改动呢？）

  Look! This is a photograph. I took during my trip (to Shanghai). This is the bus we travelled on. Look! Ma Zong-yao is on my left, Liu Yu-kun is on my right，SunYi is standing behind us, They are all my friends. Those are people I met during my trip. Can you remember that man? I told you about it. He is my classmate. You saw him at our school last year. He had the haircut. He looks ill, but I don’t think so. He can’t be ill. He must be sleeping. Look! The bus-driver is driving at sixty-five miles an hour. My teacher told him to drive slowly. He always dreaming.

  Tangshan Earthquake is a new film. Our family together watching the film on the computer last week, It’s very good. Now is a beautiful city of Tangshan. I have never been there.

  Reopen soon, my mother bought five books for me. She hope (hopes) they will help me. Women (are) always have the last word, but I love her very much.（动词的第三人称单数后一定要加“-s”或“-es”，这种错误实在不应该。）(Yan Hao-min)

我的假期

  在这个夏季，上海举办了世博会（Expo），我们全家准备去上海参观。可妈妈总是管这管那：谁来喂养小乌龟（tortoise）？谁来喂养小鱼？谁来照看家？我们每年都碰到这类问题。最后她可能哪里也去不成，只好呆在家里。

   出发前（Before departure），我买了个蓝色的书包，上面有个标签，写上了我的名字和住址，我很喜欢它。

  我去了上海，那里有数以百计的人。我的朋友马宗耀和刘玉坤也去了那里。正是夏季（It is summer），天气非常炎热，简直像火山（volcanic）！天气非常糟糕！

   你看，这是一张照片，这是我去上海旅游时拍的。这是我们乘坐的公交车。你看！马宗耀站在我的左边，刘玉坤站在我的右边，孙毅站在我们后面，他们都是我的朋友。那些是我在旅游时认识的。这个人你记得吗？我告诉你关于他的事情：他是我的同班同学，你去年在学校见过他。他该理发了（He had the haircut）。他看上去病了，可我并不这么认为，他不可能病了，他可能在睡觉。

  看！我们的车速每小时达65公里，老师告诉司机慢点开，他总是开小差。

  《唐山大地震》（Tangshan Earthquake）是部新电影，上周，我们全家一起在电脑上看了这部电影（Our  family together watching the film on the computer），它很好看。现在的唐山是座美丽的城市（Now is a beautiful city of Tangshan）。我从没去过那里。

  快开学了，妈妈给我买了五本书，她希望对我有帮助。女人总是最后说了算！不过，我很爱我的妈妈。

My holidays

  In the summer, there was an Expo in Shanghai. My husband，my son and I are going to Shanghai; I want to go mountain climbing, I want to go rafting, but I have to work and I’m not a millionaire. I always worry too much. Who’s going to look after the tortoise? Who’s going to look after the fish? Who’s going to look after the house? We have this problem every year. In the end, I stay at home and look after everything，I can’t go anywhere.

   Hao-min is twelve, he’s not a baby. He with his classmates have been to Shanghai，enjoy themselves.

  Last summer, I have gone to Chengdu. The weather was awful. It rained all the time, just as the rainy season!

  Look! This is a photograph. I took during my trip to Chengdu. That is the train we travelled on. It was doing sixty miles an hour. It’s the slowest. It was awful! But it’s cheaper than by sea or by air. They are people I met during the trip. Can you remember that man? He’s my boss. That’s the man I told you about. The one whom that you saw at our factory last mouth. He grew a bread during the trip, but he shaved it off when he came home, because his wife didn’t like it. He looks ill, but I don’t think so. He must be tired. Look! He is running at six miles an hour. I told him to yunning slowly. He always dreaming.

Little Soldier is an old film. In the hotel, I saw it on the television. The story happened a long time ago.It’s very good. Baiyang lake is a beautiful city . I have never been there. (Qian Xin-ying)

假期

   今年夏季，在上海举办了世博会，我们全家打算一起去；我想去爬山，我想去漂流（ I want to go mountain climbing, I want to go rafting），可我有工作，我也不是个百万富翁。我总爱管这管那，谁来喂养小乌龟（tortoise）？谁来喂养小鱼？谁来照看家？我们每年都碰到这类问题。最后我只好呆在家里，哪里也没去。

   昊旻已经12岁了，他不再是个孩子。他与他的同学去了上海，他们玩他们自己的。

   去年夏天，我去了成都，天气糟糕透了，它一直在下雨，简直像梅雨季节（Just as the rainy season）！

   看！这是一张照片，这是我去成都旅游期间拍的。这是我们乘坐的火车，火车的速度每小时60公里，慢极了，简直糟糕透了！但它比坐船和乘飞机便宜些。这些人是我在旅游期间认识的，你记得那个人吗？他是我的老板，我告诉你关于他的事情，这个人你上个月在我们厂见过，旅游期间他留了胡子，回去后，他理了，因为他妻子不喜欢他留胡子。他看上去病了，我并不这么认为，他肯定是累了。瞧！他跑的速度为每小时10公里，我告诉他跑慢点，他总是开小差。

  在宾馆，我们从电视上看了《小兵张嘎》（Little Soldier），那是部老电影，故事发生在很久很久以前，很精彩！白洋淀是个很美的地方，我从没去过那里。