5426 谢振礼托福范文: 当代难题
"Most Important Problem Today"
2012-10-27 TOEFL iBT China
2011-03-04 iBT North America
谢振礼 Jeenn Lee Hsieh
》近似托福独立作文真题：
>>Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The most important problem affecting our society today could be solved within our lifetime. Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
》谢振礼托福实验范文：
How to cut dependence on petroleum and set the world free is the most important issue affecting us in the present age, and this problem is expected to be solved, as it should be, within our lifetime. Precisely, over-dependence on oil to fuel our cars, trucks and airplanes is moving international society toward two major challenges: energy security and climate change. This indicates that practical solutions over the decades to come must lie in innovating renewable technology and at the same time in slowing, stopping and even reversing what is believed to have been contributing to global warming.
Today more than in the recent past, it is imperative for us to diversify energy sources so as to ensure energy security and create a sustainable energy future on the planet. This task is becoming more urgent ever day in and day out because there is no secret that the earth's known reserves of fossil fuels are running out sooner than anticipated. For now, there is no such thing as energy security without oil price and supply stability. So, if we could not be independent of petroleum as soon as possible, prices will continue to jump to new highs never before seen. Thus, among other things that include producing bio-organics to power transportation, we need to develop alternative energy sources that are clean and renewable, such as wind energy and solar energy (and even nuclear energy, if needs be). All these measures and more ought to be taken to achieve the goal of energy diversification before it is too late.
Up till now, it seems that too little has been done to decrease air pollution from emissions of motor and jet engines that burn fossil fuels. It is a known fact that our planet is becoming warmer, although very slowly, due to the growth of greenhouse gases which can eventually cause climate to change, resulting in unusual floods and droughts across the world. Unless this environmental task is effectively addressed in time, the situation of global warming is likely to become from bad to worse. Fortunately, however, there is an increasing awareness of the danger we are in. Yet, international awareness alone is not enough to protect the environment at this stage. The ultimate challenge is therefore to prevent the worst from happening in the not very distant future.
To reduce our dependence on oil, no time should be wasted when dealing with energy security and climate change. It is hoped that we would live to witness that the most important problem affecting our society today could be solved. Whatever, one thing is sure: time is not on our side. (Essay by 谢振礼 Jeenn Lee Hsieh)
》2357 谢振礼在线写作实验室 ielts360toefl@hotmail.com 猫头鹰作文隐形模板
熟读佳作三百首，不会满分也尚可。
There is no better way to learn writing than by following examples.
考前浏览至少10位写手的范文10篇以上。有好样子则学好样子，有缺点则一笑置之。多多预算，不分托福范文雅思范文，爽眼的原创都是值得一看的好范文。
《猫头鹰的影子【隐形模板】》环绕焦点的【起3承6转6合3】。结构：四段18句。
回答试题的立场就是主题。引言(起)的主题预表议论文的内容。主题的话题范围偏大，必须缩小而为焦点，如此才能控制全文。主题的焦点预表中体论证的方向。话分两头，两个论证的方向(承+转)各有一个指标(signpost)，就是招牌句(topic sentence)。到了结论(合)把话题扩大还原，因此两个指标复合：二合为一。
第一段 Introduction 引言【起】：三句话= 申论主题。 集中焦点。 话分两头。(你说你想说什么)
第四段 Conclusion 结论【合】：三句话= 二合为一。 还原焦点。 重申主题。(你说你说过什么)
第二段 Body 中体【承】：六句话= 招牌句+5个论证支持句(2-3-4-5-6)。(你说出证据来吧)
第三段 Body 中体【转】：六句话= 招牌句+5个论证支持句(2-3-4-5-6)。(你说出证据来吧)
《中体段落举例之一(Example Body Paragraph)招牌句+若干支持句》
招牌句 1. Maintaining a healthy lifestyle requires eating a balanced diet and getting regular exercises.
支持句 2. On the one hand, a balanced diet means a nutritious menu that includes eating a variety of foods from each of the four food groups: meat, dairy, fruits and vegetables, and grains.
支持句 3. However, it is important to avoid becoming overweight due to consuming fattening junk foods too much too often.
支持句 4. On the other hand, doing regular physical exercise such as walking or bicycling can also contribute to an essential part of keeping a healthy lifestyle because it helps people to stay fit.
支持句 5. For that matter, most experts recommend exercising at least 30 minutes a day, six days a week.
支持句 6. In sum, these two aspects--eating a healthy diet and exercising on a regular basis--will lead to enjoying a healthy lifestyle.
