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新东方考研英语大作文写作攻略笔记总结(1)

2009-09-17 

大作文攻略

一、1.时态为一般现在时

2.使用人称为第一人称I或第三人称(图画中的图像,内容),不许用you.

3.必须分三段式:凤头、猪肚、豹尾

4.必须在结尾部分明确出现“我认为”句式

二、复习方法

1.不限时写作,5篇左右,不修改不检查,但字数需上200.

2.40min之内完成,5篇左右,修改语法错误,替换亮点词汇.

3.30min之内完成,5篇左右,进行中间、开头、结尾的某1~3句的长难句替换,删除开头,中间,结尾所重复的内容。

4.努力记忆自己在10篇作文中频繁用到的,准确无误的词汇、句式、表达

三、逻辑思路

1.矛盾命题是灵魂,寻找积极意义是方向,开篇综述与分述(综述:图画的整体内容即图中英文or中文说明;分述:对图中细节内容描述,如若细节不描述,会扣3分左右)

2.中间析因析果析趋势 

3.结尾辨证比较给策略

四、写作方法

(一)开头

1.物法a.The picture/ drawing/ cartoon/photograph/ line/ curve/ bar graph/ pie graph describes/depicts/ reveals/ illustrates/ demonstrates an interesting phenomenon of 英文注释/中文翻译/自我解读(n.,动名词)

TIPS:尽量体现准确的稍有难度的图画内容的词汇。使用题目中的英文注释时尽量替换词汇

       b.The picture vividly/ clearly reveals the interesting phenomenon/fact that+句子

       eg. that there existed/ lay/seemed/ appeared an obvious contrast between the different commercial fishing situation of 1900 and 1955.

2.人法 a.It is vividly/ clearly/ symbolically depicted in the picture that+综述

       b.As is vividly depicted in the cartoon, 句子(综述

       c.What is vividly depicted in the picture is that 句子(综述)

3.单图分述

 sb.   In this picture, sb. can been seen doing sth.

    eg. In the picture, a charming foreign girl can been seen/viewed wearing a piece of Chinese traditional/national costume smiling.

sth.  In this picture, sth in the drawing can been seen/ viewed advertising its ridiculous promise to the public.

TIPS:单图描述时,图中人与物务必带上个人色本.文,来.源,于.贵,州.学,习.网,www.gzu521.com 彩的修饰,该修饰词汇能亮则亮,不能亮则可以使用第一反应词,第一段最少写两行半。

4.双图分述:In the first drawing, 单图例句。On the contrary, we can see / recognized / identify  容。

eg.  In the first drawing, only a single commercial ship was floating/drifting on the sea while countless/innumerable/uncountable fish was swimming happily under the sea in1900.On the contrary, ninety-five years later, the number of ships over the sea was countless whereas only a lonely and poor fish was viewed was swimming under the sea.

TIPS:1.开头部分中,单图分述时,语法务必正确,词汇务必闪亮,信息务必详尽。

     2.开头部分中,双图分述时,尽量注意两个图描写时的句型差异。

     3.注意加入情感元素(悲伤,孤单,骄傲…)

(二)中间 ----第一句话揭示寓意

1.a. 直抒寓意 The purpose/goal/aim of this picture is to convey the message/implication that 寓意(句子)

eg. The purpose of these two pictures is to convey the message that providing that commercial activities stimulated by alluring profits fail to be controlled, the natural resources will be subjected to an immense loss.

b.自问自答  What profound message/implication is mirrored/reflected in the picture above? Evidently/Of course,寓意(句子)

eg. Of course, some children who usually grow in the favorable conditions, (like flowers in the greenhouse,) are mostly likely to be frustrated (or even thoroughly damaged) in great difficulties (in adverse conditions).

c.承上启下    In frankness, the phenomenon reflected by the picture above is really a complex and complicated one, which should be analyzed in a practical and rational way,  寓意  

2.原因:a原因(名词)is normally considered as the factor contributing to this issue.

       TIPS:该原因必须使用亮点词汇且有修饰最好

       eg.Too much love and care poured by their parents are normally…

          The mutual assistance and affection in an individual’s overall development

        b.A large majority of people claim/maintain/show their insight that this issue has to be dealt with carefully, the reason being that 原因(句子)

        TIPS:该原因句最好用简单句完成,词汇尽量闪亮,但不许出语法错误。

3.结果:As a consequence, a/an disappointing/delightful/admirable phenomenon will be definitely born out, which is that 结果(句子)

eg. The loss of family responsibility in the young generation is normally considered as the factor contributed to this issue. As a consequence, a disappointing phenomenon will be definitely born out, which is that the aged/senior/elderly people in general will hardly seek out a person even among their own children to rely on and therefore live in a merciful way.

4.趋势:Assuming that this tendency tends to grow in the society, some positive/negative influence/significance will be undoubtedly resulted.

  TIPS:此句话要视中间段落的长度而定,同时注意positive和negative的选择。

(三)结尾

In conclusion, what I discussed/argued/claimed above is considerably significant from my personal perspective is the determine in offering a satisfactory solution.

TIPS:策略的表述务必准确地道靓丽。可采用动词不定式、动名词的形式表达策略的内容。

It is this strategy that has caused/attracted much attention from both the government and the public. So serious this issue/argument is that nobody shall ever overlook the necessity of dealing with it in a most efficient way. Only by this means can/will the society/human races/human being/nature/mankind/the young/the youth/the youngster/the elderly develop/advance/grow/survive in a sustainable/harmonious/wholesome/spectacular manner.

 

大作文复习TIPS:  

1.在所有给出的可选择的句子中,挑选自己较为熟悉和擅于运用的句式框架,进而组合成完整的开头、中间、结尾的三段式模块;

2.使用该简单框架时对08年以前的5年作文进行信息套入,结束后检查句式语法错误;

3.依然对上面所练的5篇文章内容进行亮点词汇替换,并对任何一个部分中所出现的重复句式重复短语进行删减or替换;

4.只使用修改后的句式框架以及亮点词汇对真题or模拟题(3篇左右)进行完整套写;

5.考试前主要阅读自己最终所写的篇章版本,对其中的亮词,亮句进行深化记忆。

 

词汇链接

重要:significant, crucial, essential       非常:considerably

关于:with reference to, as regard        获得:attain, acquire

也:as well, meanwhile                  如果:proving that

结果:consequence                      发展:advance, advancement

快乐:delighted, delightful, pleased      不能:fail to

著名:prestigious, celebrated             大:immense, titanic

认为:claim, argue, maintain             能力:competent, competence

可能:perhaps, be likely to do            上进:aggressive, aspiring

尽管:even though, despite, in spite of   

许多:quite a few, a large number of, a large amount of, a colony of +

聪明:intelligent, quick-written, talented

不许出现:good, bad, things