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新东方考研英语小作文写作攻略笔记总结(1)

2009-09-16 

小作文写作攻略

1.基本信息:商务信函和私人信函都以商务信函对待,题目中出现人名,必为私人信函

  Dear Alice, /Dear Sir or Madam,

      正文使用缩进时,缩四个字母。  三个段落

                                                     Yours sincerely,

Liming

2.小作文操作口诀:首段直抒胸臆说目的  中间谦虚委婉讲理由  结尾真诚重述送祝福

  Tips:3段为7句左右最佳,不能超过十句

3.开头:I’m writing this letter to you in order to do …/ with the purpose of doing …/ in the hope of doing…

  Tips:目的词必须是亮点词汇,即符合“四词选择”

  The purpose of mine writing this letter to you is to do…

  The reason why I write this letter to you is that I have a strong longing/ craving  to do…

eg.(2005)The reason why I write this letter to you is that I have a strong craving to present my unwilling decision of resignation from my present job.

  TIPS: 1)使用简单句式时,词汇能多亮就多亮。2)使用复杂句式时,词汇可以退而求其次,但一定是越亮越好。中间必须用结构衔接词  

1.a.  Firstly, your  R1  is the point I am mostly interested in/ concerned about/ disappointed with

  b.  First and foremost, being a 身份 who    , what I am most eager to express in this letter is R1, which actually impresses/ interests/ disappoints me greatly.

  c.  In the first place, the R1,(I derive from 信息来源) is the most crucial information I am interested in.

  TIPS:中间部分的第一句话的表述,尽量使用中等长度,但词汇需要偏亮    

2.a.  Secondly, R2 is as well another aspect I have to pay my special attention to in doing(目的)  in this letter.

  TIPS:使用时,R2必须用亮点词汇,且doing的表述方式必须和首段不同

  b.  Added to the first point(On top of the first point), the fact that R2(句子) is what I eagerly lay particular emphasis on, which proves to be fairly critical in this issue.

  eg.the fact that the opening hour of our library overly limited is the…

  c.  In the second place, R2(名词), which is believed as the major point in this matter is also where we interest/ concern/ disappoint lies in.

  TIPS:该组句式复杂,故词汇可在某种程度上选择简单词,但务必注意词汇和句式要求  

3.a.  Eventually, R3(名词) is obviously the last element I have to put forward in writing this letter to 目的(动词) .

  TIPS:务必使用亮点名词和动词形式

  b.  Last but, by no means, least, what I am deeply concerned about in offering my 目的(名词) is the one ,which a large majority of people focus on, namely R3(名词)  

  c.  In the final place, R3(名词) is the last factor which matters/ determines/ means a lot in presenting my longing for 目的(动名) .

  TIPS:①中间部分必须首先出现框架词汇(第一,第二,首先.etc.)

       ②可以对这9个句子进行随机组合,但最好出现1~2个长句,建议第二、三句

       ③切记简单句式使用亮点词

       ④练习时,从头到尾使用相同结构

  结尾:a. My sincere gratitude proposal/ application/ complaints has/ have to be repeated and I truly hope that everything goes smooth with you.

        b.An early response/ reply to me will be obviously to my great delight / satisfaction/ surprise and I honestly wish everything to be smooth around you.

        c.Actually, I feel fairly grateful/ indeed for your kindness and attention and sincerely look forward to your quick/ prompt response.

        TIPS:①不允许出现任何语法拼写错误②务必使用亮点词汇③根据题目要求,可适当对模型中词汇进行改动。

eg.(2007)

Dear Sir or Madam,

The purpose of my writing this letter to you is to offer several useful/ essential suggestions for the service of the library of our university.

First and foremost, being a student who spend most of my time in reading in our library, what I am mostly concerned about is opening hours, which actually disappoints me for the hours are fairly limited.

Furthermore, the impatient attitude of employee is another aspect I put forward in presenting my proposal.

Last but not least, what I am care about the development of our library is the one, which a large majority of student focus on namely the disappointing collection of books.

An early response/ reply to me will be obviously to my great delight / satisfaction/ surprise and I honestly wish everything to be smooth around you.

复习建议:1.把开头、中间、结尾最简单句式进行组合

          2.进行亮点词替换

          3.对小作文的中间①②③点进行任意一句长句替换

          4.对最终形成的小作文版本进行真题套写,若字数不到80,增加复杂句式,若超过130,进行句式减肥。

 

黄金句型

1.It is … that …(使用1~2个)  出现在大作文中间or结尾

  eg. It is the establishment of harmonious relationship that will enhance the advancement of the society.

2.倒数

 A. so+ adj/adv +/助动词+主语+(实义动词)+that+剩余部分  如此..以至于

So grave/ serious is the environment contamination that wild species expanding numbers have been extinct/ endangered/ on the verge of extinction.

 B. adj.+ though/ as 主语+系词,主句

  Effective as the government’s measures prove to be, there is still powerful/ potent…

 C. Under no circumstances/ By no means/ On no occasions/ In no ways +助动词+主语+实义动词+剩余部分                                 绝不…

eg. On no occasions should on individual ignore/ deny the significance of setting up a harmonious society.

D.Only when something is accomplished/ by this means/ in this way/ under this circumstance/ on this occasion +助动词+主语+动词   表预期结果

eg. Only by this means can the society be developed/ advanced/ propelled in a sustainable way.

3.插入语(通常是第二、三段) 主语和实义动词之间,用逗号隔开

adv.::    however, nevertheless, therefore, thereby, thus, generally

adj .:    needless to say无需说  most important(of all)  sure to say

介词词组:from my point of view, from my perspective, in my view, in my position, in my standpoint, on the contrary, in contrast.

句子:    as I perceive it, as I see/ view it, I am sure/ certain,

I believe/imagine/conceive

4.被选:虚拟 It is high time that sb. did sth.是…该做…